This is the project I was asked to do:

Each student will be required to develop a new business idea, prepare a businessplan (with a set of projections), and make an investment pitch that will includean Investment Memorandum (in PowerPoint) that will lay out the investmentrationale, proposed financing required, proposed valuation, and expected returnsto the investors.

I just have to fix few points and if you think that there’s something you want to add or delete in the excel part which is related to the business please fix it so that it is clear to understand for the reader and in the powerpoint too (add notes in the notes section so that it is easier to present)

This are the things you need to fix:

You will only have 20 minutes to make your presentation, so make sure you convey the most important information. Maybe less slides? Put specific information on the slides (add notes on the notes section so that it is easy to present).

It seems like your forecast only covers one location based on the $150,000 equipment cost? Is this something you would roll out to multiple locations? Maybe you don’t have to forecast that, but mention if that is the plan.

You have $350,000 for contracts or software. Is this right? What is it?

Try to be sure that all of your expense assumptions have some basis. Are there any other costs?

If you are raising debt, break up your investment into the two pieces of debt and equity and show the debt on your balance sheet with interest expense.

Finally, do some easy valuation. What is your company worth after three to five years?

Please do the changes as needed for the assignment and make things more clear.