Giving comments and feedback
Question Description
Please check the sample comments provided below. Please give feedback like, what’s good about the article, what kind of aspects needs improvements. About 200words
Hi! This is a terrific first draft. Your paper is beautifully researched, and you use your sources very well. It follows a clear compare-contrast structure that makes sense and allows your own insights to come through. At the global structural level, this paper is excellent. I think restructuring some of the paragraphs will enhance the clarity of your argument and your message。 I do have some recommendations that will help strengthen your paper: * Please be sure each paragraph has a clear, single point. It may be helpful to start each paragraph with a sentence that lets the reader know what that point is. * You may use transitions to highlight the contrast between zero-tolerance policies and alternative policies. For example, you might say, “Whereas zero-tolerance policies do X, alternative policies do Y…” or “While zero-tolerance policies focus on…, alternative policies…” *In you conclusions for each paragraph, you may want to be explicit in your contrast between zero-tolerance policies and why alternative policies are superior. Overall, this is an excellent first draft.
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